You Become the Author
I mentioned on the previously page that I am new to the writing field. Creating this novel presented many challenges and learning experiences, especially the use of descriptive language. I wanted to immerse the reader into the world of the story and experience the emotions of the characters within their settings.
The picture below shows the house where Kim’s father, Fred, grew up pre-WWII. Below it, an excerpt from the book describes the house.
What would you do to enrich the text and make the scene come alive?